like a laconic dog

subtle pornography of the fall
   watching the trees strip down
 leaving a trail of their coverings
       to a public viewing of the trees shaking against each other
                 rattling in the wind
           making love in the chilly fall air

Reviews

[CareLuv]

I adore this. Short and concise, but paints a very vivid picture.

[Cole Hayley]

I like it. Favorite piece of the day actually.