Feasting

Feasting

 

 

If a man can be a woman

then a cat can be a dog.

If you're gonna feed, then why just nibble?

Eat the whole of the hog.

Reviews

[Lisasview]

I believe that this short poem is one huge wonderful metaphor and I just love it...
Gosh, you have opened up a can of words... hopefully readers will take the time to really comprehend what this poem is about...
My head goes crazy with all the varied possibilities..
I really loved this...
I believe I have read your words before but we have never connected since then.
So I am delighted to have rediscovered you.
Often short poems are as powerful as poems that go on and on..actually, often they are far more powerful. The reader needs to sit back and take it all in.
I just went back to read this for the 4th time... I find it super clever..
I plan on reading more of yours.
I write all sorts of things..
However one of my poems which was written one early morning is full of metaphors and I do think you might enjoy it.
INNOCENCE...
All my best to you,
Lisa, now in Spain

[Montag]

Thank you Lisa, it's always a little touching when someone spends some time on one of these.

I liked Innocence and can give it what for me is a high compliment: it had a kind of fairy tale quality.

[Lisasview]

Did you leave a review?
I would so appreciate it...
Lisa

[Montag]

Just left one.

[Lisasview]

Thank you so very much... I just read it...