Waves

 Waves

 

Consider intimations of the weather, circulation of the water

overflow of rainfall data 

spilling river rushing

round an otter turning tumble

to a surging swelling, urging ever-welling sea.

Consider you are not that otter

nor the sea

nor grassy field, nor drapery of the dew.

But only one whose emanations make the world anew.

Reviews

[Ken e Bujold]

thanks for the bounty of much to consider Montag. enjoyed the new work. mix of natural metaphors with scientific stimulating

ken

[Montag]

Thanks Ken! Your comments help give me some perspective on this one, which doesn't quite seem complete.

[Ken e Bujold]

tightened the 2nd stanza, like the heightening of imagery. might want to think of x'ing "the" from in front of dew to ratchet it even more. just a thought