kitty, the lost &lonely alien..

a poem i wrote about myself.. *sigh* heres to hoping,they'll take me home, one day..

Sprinkled with aborted thoughts,gashed by razorblades..her path remains distorted, much like her brain.
&with each gasp for breath,her bruised soul turns a darker grey-in the hopes that someday the sky would take her to a world, far, far away..
Nightly dreaming of the stars..&heres what they've said,"Mood color changing lights,they drip from your skull, you're melting,you're morphing,&not even the morphine could numb this pain, no-not at all. So you've gashed&you've slashed-bled yourself to bed.You've cried&you've screamed,stabbed at the voices haunting your head. &if one day it all disappeared,would you lose yourself in silence? is happiness a word you've come to fear? We can take you to your planet, the place that you belong-we can save you from your misery..."
&With that, the stars were gone. The sunbeams surpassed the curtains-once again the day light had arrived,she closed her teary eyes.
She took a deep sigh,&turned her head, all alone,by herself,in her blood stained bed.

Reviews

[Caitlyn Blake]

thank you :3

[Jeff]

Wonderful work here. Kind of crazed!

[HorrorMaster]

I thought it was amazing.

[Caitlyn Blake]

all frantic like, just like meee *twitch twitch*

[Blake Blackstone]

I liked this poem as well... It was weird that it didn't have any real structure to it.. but it added to the emotion of it all.. being frantic like.