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just a small piece i wrote one day after talking to my best guy friend :)

I came to you asking for an understanding

 You rejected me with a cold heart

I walked away hurt .. i wasn’t pretending

Because of you what we have might fall apart

I’m not waiting for an apology

 I know it won’t be true

What I want is us like we used to be when you first told me:”I love you”

 Now,we’re face to face heart to heart

 So close yet so far apart

 I closed my eyes and looked away

Just because I wasn’t okey .

Reviews

[Trace]

Be very careful, if someone you love can easily break your heart,
he can do it often, and not care about your feelings.

Remember one word of advice.
A relationship is like a gallon of milk in the fridge.
once it goes bad, you can not take it out and put it back and have it get better

you need to go get another gallon of milk.

protect your heart and make sure the one you love will keep the fridge door closed.

[lovergirl]

thank you dear for your lovely words and especially your advice ;) i'll work with it for sure
but to tell you the truth it's hard to me to change that gallon cuz it's like i'm used to its flavor :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

untitled some relations are really untitled they must not be given any name as they as pure as colorless... Very nice poem that teaches a lot to you about love!

[lovergirl]

Thank you , i'm glad you liked it and understood it ;)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend!

[Horizons]

This's really insane when someone's heart gets broken into pieces. I'm very glad that you come up with new poetry-writing but am feeling sad that you're heart-broken.. as well.

May God Bless You!

[lovergirl]

thank you my dear , and it's all right i don't think it's the end of the world , and so you know the one who broke my heart is the same one who is working to mend it ;)

[Horizons]

This's shame. Seemed, one's trying to read the same book that he knows how it ends. You may forgive him but i'm 100% that you will never forget what he has done to you. It's not cause you want but it happens internally... your spirit will never forget his actions but only love his thoughts. So be aware. You don't like reading same books once you read 'em, cause you know... what happens in the end so, watch out, pretty.. hope you getting what i'm talking 'bout ;)

[lovergirl]

of course, i'm the type of girls who forgives but never forget ;) yeah i get you but please help hhh cause i sincerly don't thinki can live wihout his friendship he's that close to me , any way thanks a lot

[Horizons]

Your words make me saying that people ain't grow until they fall down themselves. Well... it's an infatuation nothing else and infatuation's way hazardous to heart than love. Love only takes relationships either to the end of the life or to the shore of peace but infatuation never let the heart live restless so... till he ain't break your heart, you won't understand what love is. But to be honest, I don't wish anything bad. Wish you much that if he again enters your heart, may he treasure you and your beautiful spirit. The rest of the things're depend on... what his actions're 'bout. By the way, if you too want him back, you can test him by doing what he hates the most. If he loves you.. would even finds beauty, no matter what you do... otherwise.. you know what i'm talking 'bout. Hope my words help you!

[lovergirl]

i hope so too , that's why i want to give a second chance . i did but he only got upset and than tried to make me jealous by hangin out with my friend , he has such a complicated mentality that he's impossible to read or understand , thanks you're very helpful