The moment you walked away

The moment you walked away

A Poem by lovergirl
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my 5 years and more Best friend got mad at me and left my life , that day i lost my very close best friend , i lost a piece of my heart , so i wrote this and hope he read it :)

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The Moment You Walked Away

 

©     The moment you walked away  , my heart fell down

I had nothing to say , I couldn't make a sound

©     Felt like I’d scream and cry ,  but nothing came out

©     « Your words » I had to obey, to never talk to you again

©     It’s you who I should blame , It’s your choice and your decision

©     I've got no more to say , but just so you’d know

©     I never trusted someone that way , you, of all were my favorite man

©     I loved you like no one will ever do, I swear it’s not a lie it’s so true

©     Ask my friends and they’ll tell you , how much they've heard about you

©     Hoping one day you’ll regret , the pain you caused me today

©     I can’t help crying at night , when no one sees and no one will ever judge  

© 2015 lovergirl


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Here you open your caramel heart in such deep down piercing words ... to let your emotions burst out ov`r the plain sheets of love. Reading your stuffs seemed like feeling your tender emotions in heart. Interesting!

Well, the one thing`s sure.. through what you write`s that you`ve or had got a really freaking crush on someone who just, sadly, couldn`t see it through your eyes or through what you cooked for him. Hope he understands the value of love someday.. before it`s too late to! Nevermind, but one day, you won`t regret for whatever just happened to your beautiful life. God has got you something much best and better than him so, stop dreaming of him anymore, beautiful. Let him go. You can`t stop who ain`t even want to be stopped. It`d make you weak, emotional, & worthless even to world if you keep tryna pull the rein of winds. Easy... easy. All Good. Open your eyes, & see the beauty of world, faith, & love - A love that you deserve with much faith, & blessings instead of just being "into the zone of" broken leaf of your heart. Let it be on mend, sweety ;)

All Good. 100/100!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Horizons

9 Years Ago

Flirtationship (more than friendship less than a relationship)? Sounds interesting. I like you kinda.. read more
lovergirl

9 Years Ago

thank you for these beautyful words , always lovin your reviews ;)
Horizons

9 Years Ago

Anytime, pretty.



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Here you open your caramel heart in such deep down piercing words ... to let your emotions burst out ov`r the plain sheets of love. Reading your stuffs seemed like feeling your tender emotions in heart. Interesting!

Well, the one thing`s sure.. through what you write`s that you`ve or had got a really freaking crush on someone who just, sadly, couldn`t see it through your eyes or through what you cooked for him. Hope he understands the value of love someday.. before it`s too late to! Nevermind, but one day, you won`t regret for whatever just happened to your beautiful life. God has got you something much best and better than him so, stop dreaming of him anymore, beautiful. Let him go. You can`t stop who ain`t even want to be stopped. It`d make you weak, emotional, & worthless even to world if you keep tryna pull the rein of winds. Easy... easy. All Good. Open your eyes, & see the beauty of world, faith, & love - A love that you deserve with much faith, & blessings instead of just being "into the zone of" broken leaf of your heart. Let it be on mend, sweety ;)

All Good. 100/100!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Horizons

9 Years Ago

Flirtationship (more than friendship less than a relationship)? Sounds interesting. I like you kinda.. read more
lovergirl

9 Years Ago

thank you for these beautyful words , always lovin your reviews ;)
Horizons

9 Years Ago

Anytime, pretty.

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Added on January 9, 2015
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