some feelings

I just held a pen and started letting everything out :) hope u like what came out

Every time I close my eyes I see you , 

you here next to me , is it a dream or is it true ?

I don't know and I don't care 

'cause I think of you every second of the day 

and I wish that not only in my dreams but also in my life you'll stay

I love you boy to death , 

and in you I have faith ,

that you'll never let me down 

or even leave me alone , 

please don't make me feel wrong .

PS : I never felt close to anyone the way I feel with you , 

       and I hope from the bottom of my heart to never lose the relation we have and our love too <3

                                               XOXO Lovergirl <3 

Reviews

[Horizons]

No worries, I ain`t got any plan to disappoint you. (smiling)

Nice poetry. You & your so colorful heart both sang the song in the formats of such lyrical poem. I consider this write one of my favorites. It contains the depth of soul, love and heart... which make this write, & of course, you full of insights, & pleasure. Love`s very good thing for - sure that can either damage the heart or heal it all up with peace, it`s all found in beholder`s eyes. Great job as usual!

[lovergirl]

thanks weety , fyi it damaged my heart this time , just a little ;) but surprisingly it's the same that's healing it now so i think it's a good thing "hopefuly" , thank you very much for the review

[Horizons]

So my "review" damages a beautiful one`s beautiful heart. What should I do now to make her up? It`s better to me to get unleashed to her soft feet before she pulls me tight to her and says, hey hotty... common fix my heart. Lol

[lovergirl]

hhh love it , so why don't you do it
you won't be released untill i say i liked it
than maybe i won't let you go even if you fix it
but for sure i'll make you lovin it :p

[Horizons]

Listen up my little-miss
I can be very poisonous to your bliss
but would love to love you all day.. all night
If this`s what you want...
I, of course, would get unleashed to your beautiful feet.

[lovergirl]

yes , i would love that
take me to your flat
and i'll give my heart
i'll show you few tricks at night
hope it'll start with a pellow fight
than things will get tight
and i'll ask you to turn off the light
and maybe i'll give you a kiss or a bite ...

[Horizons]

And.. with an every bite,
I`m sure, my flat even my heart`d feel your shimmered sigh
blown off your muse to the lips of my, no lie, be shy
As the index finger`d turn the light off
You and I`d be one... lying down under the blessing of moon-light
In mid-light, you and I
& your moan with the sighs.. with smile, Opps, I apologize.