i love him

i love him

A Poem by lovergirl

Him again ;)

 

I never felt the way I feel when I’m with him,

I know I can be myself; I can do whatever I want.

The only one I kissed, the only one I hugged,

In his arms I could reach: 

The end of the rainbow, the edge of the Everest Mountain.

I felt warmness and security

He makes me lose my sanity

Every time I look into his eyes 

I get the feeling of chill; I get the feeling of love,

Yes, yes he makes me feel that.

Whenever I need him he's there, every time I cry he takes away my tears   

In sadness and grief or in joy and happiness 

He’s the only one I never miss, 'cause he's always present 

Always there for me, so I can never thank him enough 

But I’ll start by saying every day and by every way:

"Thank you so much my dear forever and always""

                 

                            By: lovergirl <3

© 2014 lovergirl


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That is gratitude reflected in your words so simple and straight. Nice work, but when you say "He makes me lose my insanity", was the use of the word insanity intentional, or was it supposed to be sanity and you mistakenly put it that way??

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lovergirl

10 Years Ago

thank you man , and yes it was supposed to be sanity i'll change it right now because the meaning is.. read more
yash

10 Years Ago

I thought so, nevermind, i keep on making such mistakes most of the time, so now, i 've caught an ey.. read more

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