your chance

Why can't u be honest , 

                              one word is all it cost

u should know i'm the sweetest ,

                             and that's what u just lost

the fear of loosing u was the biggest,

                              cuz my heart is kind and soft 

please don't try to be the coolest ,

                        remember i know who u r and who u r not.

If i did somethin' wrong just say it ,

                        for me in one word , will u spell it

cuz i have to know the mistake that i did

                      and if u're wrong u'll be busted

speak now or shut for ever , 

                       my love for you is getting smaller 

i apologize  any way , 

                            that's all i have to say

yet keep in mind tried and you didn't 

                           there will come the day u regret it 

then it will be too late 

                          cuz with me "one" chance is all you get 

Reviews

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I would have wanted to point out the spelling errors but I realized they are like that for a purpose. That's such a brave thing to do. :)

Anyway, I'm not into this structure and style so I can't give you an intelligent review. All I know is that the spirit of the speaker here is commendable. That's it, girl! Show him wht he had just lost. :)

I wish I could write as straighforward and as courageous. :)

[lovergirl]

thank you dear , i really do like your comments anyway ;)