will you forgive me ?!

i should've post this days ago , sorry for the late !!

         if i have to say something about what happened i'd say :" i'm sorry" 

                                i know my mistake and i regret it ,

                               i just wish if you can forget it ,

             "please" and "sorry" i'm words i'm not used to it 

                            this is something you should get it ,

so help me burn the fact that i said it , because i'll never do it again or repeat it

                            there's no more i'll say or i'll do 

                          but only if you may , i'll tell you :

                                             "I love you" 

 I'm crying day and night  , wondering if you'll forgive me or this i might ?!

                     i'll keep begging on my knee , till i see the light 

                    that you'll forgive me , or just stay by my sight 

                   I know you're not talking to me , but all i want is no more fight 

                     and i want to know that me , you will not kill or bite ...

                     

Reviews

[Horizons]

A very heartfelt poem that's written right from the bottom of the heart. Theme's good but sad and an emotional one, but sometimes such kinda pieces give some relief to mind and heart... because what a time brings no one can predict .. we just can predict's a hope of a great time in the life. Concept's good and very realistic. Am glad your back at your work again. Go on, your skills're now increasing. Nice flow of ink.

[Horizons]

An emotional write, words're touched my heart. Your fondness's're fluctuating over the words, being a human, i felt this painful piece .. you ripped my heart off through this poem. No one'd love to see your eyes filled with tears .. life's big but sometimes it seemed short .. before falling in love ..life's big.. after fallling in love, life becomes short .. but the world never comes to an end whether your in love or not .. dear .. just live your life, i know worst time comes in everyone's life and they put you down on the knees but a hope of a beautiful time always stay by your side to bring some peace in your life after a worst time .. just have some patience dear frnd.. everything'll be all right. you just don't stop smiling .. :) I felt the pain of your crying heart. Good job, well penned your feelings into great rhyming words. Keep writing :)

[lovergirl]

where are your reviews people ?? :(

[Horizons]

Aww, don't be sad, lovegirl .. wait a minute.. am gonna give you my review.. don't worry, i can't see you sad, so, i'll give you Two great reviews .. Now smile :)