Fairy tale !

A Poem by lovergirl

i wrote this to my beloved one "my Bou" <3

Today when i read your text , my mind had no rest ,

because i missed you so much and i wanted to see you in a rush ,

when i looked through the window my heart beats were slow ,

but whene i opened the door they got faster moreand more ,

i fell like i'm in jail what to do to get out from the hell ,

as if someone throw us a spell

so our relationship be like "fairy tail" <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

© 2017 lovergirl

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Lol... You're really very damn funniest writer i've ever seen .. How beautifully you say in a smiling way about your feeling, about your every heart beat... is so strange. I'm sure now you've got such an awesome and an unique talent of writing and it's now a pleasure to read youse stuffs. Your Rhyme i've seen that never breaks down but it continues always all the time in a new creative way and i loved it .. This poem's so true and those who're in love mostly... this poem applies on 'em admittedly.. lol

Looking at the sky and wishing to be a bird mostly the human want but touching the sky and feeling the breathe to be in heave you don't or never wish i think, cos you knew it already how to touch and live in other's heart. Your poem today made me damn refresh cos from past few days i'm feeling damn tired but today i can't believe that someone's poem made me refresh .. lol really..omg.. lol

An Amazing poem with that's written with your beauty kindhearted heart plus with scented love. I really loved and enjoyed this piece. It's the greatest piece i've ever read in a funniest way i loved it much, so right now am gonna firstly save it in my folder and then gonna fav. it and keep it in my library ;) This poem really touched me .. but i think it's you that touched me and my heart through this piece.
I loved this poem mostly i do love your Rhyme always. Now what am thinking's It's i think an honor reading your stuffs ... lol Nice flow of ink, brilliant job dear "Lover".. oh.. i meant "Lovergirl" .. lol ;)