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A Poem by lovergirl

i don't know why i wrote this , but this i what i felt at that time and it came out like words ;)

Life , Love , Stress and every thing ,

O.M.G what ha it been ?!

It gave me butterfly that made me wonna die ,

Hey boy listen to what i have to say ,

so you don't mistake your way ,

treat me well or you'll spend your life in jell ,

i swear i'm not kidding ,

don't come back begging

for help or release , it's you who gave me this disease

like they say : you lose when you sneaze ,

no more words from you , no more i beg or please ,

all i wonna hear is : "i love you" because you know how to make me pleased .

© 2013 lovergirl

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Lol.. don't ya think now it's an awesome write you made !!! lol. I really enjoyed this poem, well done. I can feel this poem even am still screaming this poem in my poem so rhyming poem. I loved this much so, i'm just gonna first save it in my folder and fav. it or put it into my library ... it's a poem i think you made acc.. to situation.. lol you made it in a funniest way so that everybody could read and reality in a smiley way :) I was really chuckling when i was reading this piece.. lol It's really so beautifully done. Thanks for writing such a piece and sharing with us :) Whatsoever happens in today's life.. you just kept the views of today's life in your mind and just converted your feeling into the words what you felt about the world how cruel it's been already now a days.. but true's still existed in the life you just so smoothly defined every term whatever yu wanted to say... That's all i just got from here, by your words, from your this beautiful piece... I got it :)
I really enjoyed reading this... brilliant job as usual!