me !!

i tried possibly to henestly describe my self , hope you get a close version of who i am by this writing :)

Brave , crazy sometimes strong , but nothing last too long , right ?!

I'm loving , have many friends , love them so for them i'll fight ;)

sometimes i get hurt but i never show it, yet my Best Guy Friend always sees it 

I adore him with all my heart , because he is always by my sight , 

I care about every one so much i guess this is my weakness , 

with my friends i become a silly girl full with craziness , 

but that's alright because this is who i am and without them i'll never be the same <3

Reviews

[Horizons]

Ok... Now i must say, you've a great talent to express your feelings very well in your own words. I liked your this new poem because i've got something new, something real, something you know a heartfelt piece of peace. Your starting was started with the great questioning and it's wow, that your ending well ended with the great answer that you're alone as well as weaken without frnds, i know how frnds make the life beautiful. Good frnds always make the life beautiful, hanging out with good frnds is such a way to feel the beauty of the nature what it's provided. We learn more new thinks with frnds as well as from new frnds like.. for an instance we became now frnds and with the time we'll be good frnds and we'll learn more about new things on our point of views because every one has diff. diff point of views on the stuffs.... and we learn more. Like I'll learn something new from your point of views what you think on the topics and you'll (may be..) learn something from my point of views what i think of...and so on.... so, frnds really matter in the life making it beautiful and living it brightly in a good as well as in a creative way. And your pic. you've pasted here with the poem that "You don't know me" that shown the whole thing of your poem, it gave the overview on the poem. No one can know anyone because no one can know oneself ;) I loved your this thought. That's all i got from here.
You've a nice and a creative way to write, write on more and share your writes more and more, we'll learn more from our new topics by putting our views on it. Well done, an excellent poem on frnds, how much you love your frnds you've well expressed your feels into the words.

[lovergirl]

than'x for your amazing review , i liked it , yeah sure i'd love to learn from you cuz noone is perfect in the whole world , and i (myself) enjoy learning from others and have another points of views because i love exploring the world from other people's eyes and ther ideas extand my mide with new thought all the time , well sorry for taking too long just thank you for your opinions and Lol :p i hope we enjoy each other poens and friendship ;)

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Straightforward and honest. No need for excessive metaphors and poetic figures. Thank you for letting us know who you are. :)

[lovergirl]

you r very welcome ana i thank you for your openion i love it so ;)

[girlwithdreams]

You are very good at expressing your life and the things that you love.. very good piece of writing. :)

[lovergirl]

thanx a lot , i apreciate your comment

[Rose of many colours]

very simple and to the point. Its from the heart as well this makes it unique..Thanks for sharing..

[lovergirl]

you're welcome , thanx for your honest opinion and review ;)

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That was an awesome write. A lot love felt feeling! Great write!

[lovergirl]

thank you very much , i'm glad you like it

[0000000000000000000000000000]

Your very welcome:)

[song writer]

side not sight
Sorry but i think that's what you meant

[lovergirl]

yeah you're right i'll change it later , and than'x