B-s**t

I met someone i like and that's what icame up with when i thought of him the other night ;) the B is for bull so B-s**t is bullshit :p

you say you love me you say you care

but i say this is just B-s**t ,

sorry if i'm not being fair

i'm sure you didn't mean it ,

because there's so much we haven't share *so let me tell you the one thing you get

me and you we're going no where

if you keep repeating the crapy s**t

so stand by and just stare

maybe one day you get the bet that you set the last time we met

and i made you swear to not love me or even care at least not just yet  ;)

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I like the honesty in this piece - as if your thoughts spilled from your heart right onto the page.
"I made you swear to not love me or even care at least not just yet'

I love that line - "at least not yet" - leaving your heart open for the future.

:) Julie

[lovergirl]

thank you darling for your review ;)

[terry smith]

...at least not just yet....loved this...protecting yourself...smart

[lovergirl]

glad you liked it ;) thanks for the review

[C. Lee Battaglia]

Wow this was amazing! I saw so much emotion and sadness and there were a few typos. but nothing unfix able... It was still great though!
So keep on being awesome and keep up the great work!

C. Lee Battaglia

[lovergirl]

thank tou so much for your amazig review i appreciate it ;)

[Trace]

So sorry to see such a sweet soul have to deal with the Bull S#!t
but poetry is a great way to express your feelings and emotions.

Do you need a new gallon of milk?

[lovergirl]

hh yes i always find my way out in poetry ;)
and this one is such an old gallon it's the first one ,i didn't care about it like i do with the 2nd which i don't want to replace ;)

[Ov3R_sKiLl3D]

beautiful poem enjoyed reading it :)

[lovergirl]

thanks , i'm glad you did

[Paper Forks]

Fast-paced. Nice rhythm. Interesting tone. I enjoyed it.

[lovergirl]

thanks for this comment ;)

[Horizons]

Lol, Don't you think, it's a funny write... ! Lol, i enjoyed reading this, i love the honesty lol ;) Yeh it's a great way to express reality even you know everybody says I love you and I like you and what so ever.. but in today's world am sure there's hardly very few people living who know the true meaning of love. I felt the write even i read the piece twice a time so i'm now gonna save this write because it's so true and a heartfelt write written from the heart, concept came from the reality i felt it. Well, i hope you're of your words... Lol you used in the poem. Keep following the words of you own heart and living the life every day with a new challenge in life, because every day brings some challenge for everyone to live on and those who accept the challenge what life brings for... they know the meaning of life how beautiful is this... and how beautiful the nature's where every living's enjoying the day without any fear in life. A clear sight of words i've see from you, though the piece by your poem. I really enjoyed the piece of writing. Well done!

[lovergirl]

thanx for your honest opinion i liked it , and i can asure you that all of this is true and from my heart even the rhyming i didn't think of it it just come into my head, yeah i do enjoy my life and live each day at it time , i'm so adventurous and honest with my self hope you sees that in my upcomming writing ;)

[Horizons]

Welcome! Yeh, this's a life and it's you know been overcrowded by too many types of species... Including being humans... and this's out species which's now further been overcrowded by people and what people do in their life depends on them... How they accept the challenge ... how they move on with the life... and so on. It's nice to heart you're a very good and a rhymer one, great to heart too that you love accepting challenges and i can say this you can because it's been shown by you words from your this writing. I really enjoyed this poem you made. Everyday's beautiful .. and how we make it more beautiful with our work what we do depends on us. So, in short, B-S**t's come from the life and how it can be improve the matter also comes from the life there's only a need to open up the eyes to see the challenge and there's a need to do work acc. to situations what a life brings for us to face that challenge, that's all just depend on us and depend out thinking. This write's really very cool and real, that's why i've saved this write, i enjoyed this write, i always love reading such kinda real stuffs which're realistically penned up in a creative way. Well done for that. And yeh, why not... as you come up with your new write i'd love reading that one too afterall you're an adventurous one and it's an honor to read the stuffs of adventurous one... Lol. Best wishes for your up coming write. Hope you're upcoming the new write very soon.

[lovergirl]

you are totaly right for all what you said , and thank you you'll be reading my writing soon enough and hopefuly you get it understand it and love it ;)

[Horizons]

... would be a very pleasurable honor to me to read your beautiful new writes. I find it all very insightful & gracious even to read you through, whole.