Forget-me-not

I want feedback, whenever you feel forgotten, or your memory begins to fade, but you hold onto that feeling in your heart...

Forget-me-not It feels lonely without you Passing days blurr by I count the days until I can be happy Once again. Your hands are warm will I still remember what you look like? Much has happened Time has passed Don't worry, I'll recognize the sound of your footsteps as always. I'll recognize your eyes see the change in time.(edited)

Wait for me I'll- soon- ** "There was a car accident on I-35. Calling for back up."

Author's Note

Please give me feedback on how I can improve this!! Thank you. I want to really dwelve my brain for the intuition i'm trying to write that i'm not quite getting...
the black background was an accident, made the text white instead.

Reviews

[bee]

Woah that was quite the plottwist at the end. But I really liked it. That makes the poem stand out more.