It should be easy

It should be easy

A Poem by Amber Smith

A new soul that heals
This once again dark void
Extinguishing it all
Making the pieces whole

But the dosage is too strong
Its terrifying
The feelings too deep, Too real
Soul trembling concrete

I've found it, its genuine
The "it" others search endlessly for
I've got my fairy tale
So where is the happy ending

Joy just brings fear
How long until it happens again
Slowly deteriorating 
Reaching for the self-detruct

Easy and yet grueling
Why was pain effortless
It is expected
How do I live in simple bliss

© 2018 Amber Smith


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It seems life sometimes brings these unfortunate happenings in our lives at times. Sometimes our standards should be set higher. Sometimes it's about waiting and seeing what kind of fruit that the tree shall bear. Self-discipline is one of the hardest traits to master, yet we should always be in pursuit of it.

I think you did a great job in projecting the expressions in this piece!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amber Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Levi Levin

6 Years Ago

Your welcome!



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Amy
Love this and can definitely relate. Very well done

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Amber Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you !!
Refreshingly depressing. I enjoyed this poem. Well done. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Amber Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much:)
this reminds me so much of my own writing, amazing job!

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Amber Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
I feel you. Its a great poem. I love it

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Amber Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Rye
a very emotional read here, nicely expressed

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Amber Smith

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much
It's hard to put faith in something you been lacking for a long time.but if you don't have take a chance how will you ever know.great job revealing the doubt within yourself

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Amber Smith
Amber Smith

St. Petersburg, FL



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