You Make Me Feel Beautiful

You Make Me Feel Beautiful

A Poem by Monners

Darling, you are so perfect

Kissing me goodnight

Holding me tight

Nowhere else in the world I'd rather be

Than next to you

Holding me tight

Kissing me goodnight

Holding your hand

You understand me

You are so beautiful

In every way imaginable

You know how much I need you

And want you

And love every second with you

You make me feel invincible

And gorgeous

Even in pajamas with sex hair

Holding me tight

Kissing me just right

I get so lost sometimes

You reassure me

In your eyes

I feel perfect

© 2008 Monners


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Nice love poem. I like the way you describe how this person makes you feel beautiful. Nice write!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sounds like it could be a song. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this because it is very relatable..My b/f makes me feel this way..i am embarassed to not be dressed up, hair curled, and make up on in front of him..but i've come to notice that he's more attracted to me when i am just being simple and plain..he tells me i'm radiant when i feel dull..when i;m around him ia m thinkin of nothin else because he makes me feel wanted and loved..i love that you expressed feelings that i've felt when i look at him..lol i love that..you are saying things in this poem that i have thought about b/4..i love that..i enjoyed the read...
Well From Word-Play Poet To The Next...Always Remember To Write With Your Heart!

s~Shanty~s

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet and beautiful. Straight to the point about things with no beating around the bush. It's so real and raw. Props to you Monica.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

simple but effective

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

if a guy is able to make his woman feel this way...then he's obviously done something right.

too bad i haven't done that yet. but someday...someday i will.

nice write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow. I hope I make my love feel like this lol. Absolutely wonderful that someone makes you feel this way. The guy should be very proud. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a cute poem.
Nice job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 3 people found this review constructive.

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Awww ;) This was so awesomely cute lol. It was very warm and deep. I love the beautiful expressions and the loving tone you give it. Truly from your heart :) Absolutely beautiful write!!

Mikey

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MJ-

Great work! Can you write anything without sex in it? Lol. Just kidding. That was beautiful!

-Gabe


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 27, 2008

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Monners
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