Coming in and going out...

If you find me gone one day..

Do not cry and do not shout,

Just pray for me and carry on.....

 

If you find me gone one day..

Do not be sad, do not look for me,

Just let me be and carry on...

 

Coming in and going out..

This is the fixed cycle of life,

We come, we grow, we hope, we go...

 

So if you find me gone one day..

Do not worry, do not mourn,

For I have lived, and you must carry on...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

like a note left on the kitchen table...

i am leaving (in one way or another--through death, or just need to be alone)
and you need to move on, without me.

very sad piece in a way, but does show strength. and asks for strength from the one spoken to.

[Moniba]

That's another great way to look at it ;)

[Michael G. Smith]

The ebb and flow of life, to act or be acted upon. I just hope that I am loved when it is time to journey back to heavenly home. That any mourning is only cause that we affect. Always a fan Moniba.

[Moniba]

I hope se too. And thankyou very much.

[zainul]

This is a great write.
I appreciate your courage to write about the truth.

[Moniba]

JazakAllah!

[oxo]

these words were very true. very simple but the message is clear. nice write!

[Moniba]

Thankyou very much :) I'm glad you got the message.

[Muhammad Qasim]

this is a nice supportive peace for those who have lost those close to them!! its gently pennned and the flow is just too smooth!! :)

[Moniba]

Thank you for the review ;) It means a lot.

[Muhammad Qasim]

it was my pleasure to be able to comment on such a nicely written piece!! : )