They fall without a sound...

Blurring the world from my sight,

They find their way down...

Snatching away all the logic,

They fall onto the ground...

Heavy upon my heart,

They weigh nothing to those around...

Fueling my burning emotions, 

They let all reason drown...

Depriving me of all my strength,

They continue to flow unbound...

Awakening the suppressed sobs, 

They make my head pound...

Making the world seem distant,

They fall-my tears, without a sound...

~Moniba.

Author's Note

Let me know if it seems incomplete or if there's room for improvement and how.

Reviews

[J. Write]

Beautiful poem with brilliant descriptions. Well done.

[Moniba]

Thank you very much :)

[Zenithex]

Its nice

[Moniba]

Thank you.

[Muhammad Qasim]

The flow was awesome and the description aswell .. really nice work .. keep it up

[Moniba]

JazakAllah.

[Muhammad Qasim]

MashAllah

[dunnia]

wowo this is amazing i love the line " fueling my burning emotions ".....very nice :)

[Moniba]

Thank you dunnia :)... I like that one too.

[MAH MEKOLLE]

I loved it, I wanted to keep reading more, great job