In the state of Solitude....

There in the state of solitude

She sat, her head bowed down

Looking for the vital signs of life

The soft light of dusk, caressed her cheeks

 

What misfortune had come to her

She knew, and only God knew

She prayed to God, dusk prayed with her

And then twilight fell upon

 

She lifted her head and gazed up to the sky

Then felt her worries dissolve up high

Her disquietude just vanished

Solutions came to her

 

Allah helped her through

She thanked Him for that

And twilight thanked Him with her

She needed this now

 

Those moments of solitude

Engraved upon her heart

She’ll never forget them

‘cause there, she found God!…

Author's Note

All thoughts are welcome.

Reviews

[The dark story]

wow...the imagery are so vivid and creates a powerful impact on us...it's so ravishing and beautifully penned ...

"She prayed to God, dusk prayed with her"...i liked this line the most...though it seems simple but it is quite touching...it signifies that when one truly prays to God for his help...even the non-living objects assists them...great write!!

[Moniba]

Thankyou for the enthusiastic review, Atiba.

[Muhammad Qasim]

WOW!! this is mind blowing!! seriously it great and the way you penned it!!! simply awesome :D

[Moniba]

Thanks.

[Muhammad Qasim]

NP

[Daniel Eckert]

A very interesting religious piece also a rather enjoyable read. Thank you for sharing it with us.

[Moniba]

Thank you for your comment, sir :)