Out Of The Blue

I tried as possibly as I could to describe an indescribable person.

‪#Out_Of_The_Blue‬.

‪#‎March_The_19th‬.

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Out of the blue, she came.

We were identically the same.

I cannot forget her name.

Damn, I was lame.

I could not hold tight on her.

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She was rare.

But, did she really care?!

I tried to open my heart.

But, it was shut hard.

It was not a crime.

Yes, it was as bitter as lime.

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Out of the blue, she came.

In my mind, carved her name.

Was it just a game?!

I should not have tried putting her in the frame.

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Out of the blue, she came.

Will we ever meet again?!

On the hall of fame, maybe?!

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All what I wanted to say is: "STAY"!!

Author's Note

What do you think, guys?

Reviews

[Lubna]

I like the fact that you portray your feeling very strongly. If she doesn't come I'm sure you will find someone who is made just for you. The one who will Stay. Good luck and keep writing beautiful poems like this.

[RED]

Thanks, I sincerely appreciate your words, letter by letter.

Who knows if she will come or not!?

Anyway, we all learn lessons in life, and, without them, we will never make a simple progress.

I hope I will keep writing good and truthful poems. ^_^

[Adam W Redmon]

I love poems Like this man it's amazing. I can feel the love and anger in it.

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Thanks for your review.
I really appreciate it.

[Emma-Leigh Ivy Cox]

This is a very well written poem. I like the sense of urgency you give it, you relate it well to the reader. :)

[RED]

Thanks for reading it, and I am glad you liked it. :)