We Remain

We Remain

A Poem by MomzillaNC

Resting in the hollow of the years

reveling in the surety of us 

leaning back against you

contemplating in silence

comfortable hearts together

We remain 


Through hard scrabble hope

illuminated by bursts of joy

through stormy or shining days

growing wiser with the years

we share this treasured land.

We remain


Always and always… together

hand in hand through the years

united in love’s embrace

soul to soul only for each other

this is the miracle of us

We remain



© 2024 MomzillaNC


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A beautiful romantic love poem....together always... we remain..it's so pleasant to read about couples through the many years of being ONE get along so well... notwithstanding a few quips...
I like the repetition of always, and "we remain" after each stanza... just gives it a little more oomph!
Warmly, B

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Betty Hermelee

7 Months Ago

You’re very welcome!
Warmly, B



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So beautiful, so wonderful my dear friend. If we are lucky. Two can remain one in love for forever. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry and your thoughts.
Coyote

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

7 Months Ago

Yes, "two can remain one love for forever." Sometimes, I feel like Hamid and I have been around this.. read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

A wonderful poem my friend.
MomzillaNC

6 Months Ago

Thank you
A beautiful romantic love poem....together always... we remain..it's so pleasant to read about couples through the many years of being ONE get along so well... notwithstanding a few quips...
I like the repetition of always, and "we remain" after each stanza... just gives it a little more oomph!
Warmly, B

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

7 Months Ago

Thank you so much.
Betty Hermelee

7 Months Ago

You’re very welcome!
Warmly, B
With all the whining and bitterness I see on the site, it's nice to encounter someone who has found what really matters. Well done.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

7 Months Ago

Thanks so much
That is the way to do it..."hand in hand"---

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

7 Months Ago

Thanks, Jacob

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Added on April 28, 2024
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