Silent Witness

This one takes a little liberty with the form. Traditionally, it's 5/7/5. I've made this one 7/5/7

A rising path skirts the sea

Sheltered by clear skies

The tree stands silent witness

Photo by Stuart Aken

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

do you think the tree will talk? give away our secrets?
i think there will be little more than slight rustling of the leaves.
j.

[MomzillaNC]

Indeed… if the trees could talk?

Or, perhaps they've always been talking but we cannot understand them.

[Robert Trakofler]

I call that... my the audience of one:)

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks. 😎

[lu.]

awesome, this is so beautiful!

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you