Spoken Word reading of "To The Me That Was"

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

Wow, MomZ--
superlative poem and your reading is so engaging...we feel the despair and then the hope...the child scorned, mistreated by the mother, unloved..but the grandmother gives her hope, and urges she become the best she can be and withstand the mental and emotional torture because in the end there will love...
beautifully done.
j.

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks so much, Jacob. I worry about my voice and narrative style. A southern accent is so very often deemed "not smart."

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh no...your voice is perfect...you could read the phone book and it would sound good!

[MomzillaNC]

Oh my… such fulsome praise makes me blush. Thank you.

[Robert Trakofler]

This is just pure wonderful loving poetry dear Denise!!!! I am stunned by the sincere honesty of emotion you placed on the page! This comes as no surprise having to have gotten to know you... but it just reinforces just how beautiful a heart you are! what a wonderful share this is thank you for showing me this one

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you so much for your fulsome praise.

So… now it's up to you to take up the challenge to have that talk with your own younger self!

[Robert Trakofler]

He might beat me up:/

[MomzillaNC]

😲 🥺

[Sami Khalil]

I loved it and the voice is so marvelous. The story is unfolding with pain and hurt, but promises of love, peace and joy are on the horizon. I can sense all the emotions. You are artful...

[MomzillaNC]

I really appreciate that. Thank you, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome. Good job...