hey... no fair I didn't write mine yet oops should of waited to read this one i'm gonna have to "dead puppy" this poem if im gonna write about barks and moon... LOL:) great cadence and rhyme to this one MOM keep the horrors coming
Posted 5 Years Ago
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5 Years Ago
Thanks. I'm working on the spoken word part now. I'm toying with background sounds, but, it'll proba.. read moreThanks. I'm working on the spoken word part now. I'm toying with background sounds, but, it'll probably just be the simple reading.
And, you can combined the prompt words in any way you're inspired to use them.
Say… are you any kind of thespian? Do you have a way to create an mp3 file? And, if so, would you.. read moreSay… are you any kind of thespian? Do you have a way to create an mp3 file? And, if so, would you try to record something for me? I'd like to have the werewolf transformation for my poem. But, my husband and my son are not the creative types and don't get poetry at all.
Do you think you could convincingly record yourself acting it out? I'd like to have about 8 to 16 seconds of the following:
• You're suddenly seized by the transformation, wracked with pain
• You scream, "Oh God, no!"
• Your scream becomes a growl
• You give a short, sharp howl, cut off mid-howl
After the cut off human howl, I have a wolf-howl already.
5 Years Ago
i could give it a try:)
5 Years Ago
That'd be terrific! Just message me on FB and I'll give you my email to send the mp3 file when it's .. read moreThat'd be terrific! Just message me on FB and I'll give you my email to send the mp3 file when it's ready. Thanks so much!
My slow, old brain had to ponder those last words for a bit before the clever play on words became apparent. Slick writing, my friend--just right for the coming of scary things. (The fun kind, not that horrible orange thing)
Ooooooooooooo lovely one. I was lilting along with the rhythm and half way through realised what was happening. Revenge , they say, is a dish best served cold. In this case it happened to be hot.
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Thanks so much, Clive. Have you looked into Steemit.com yet? It’s a cryptocurrency monetized blogg.. read moreThanks so much, Clive. Have you looked into Steemit.com yet? It’s a cryptocurrency monetized blogging platform. So far, it’s slow growth, but I am seeing value growth on my account. The way it apparently works, is that by joining, you lend your computing power to the system which mines for cryptocurrency (like bitcoin, but his is steem). You don’t have to put up with ads you have no control over on your work, and the growth seems to be dramatically faster so far. For example, in four years, with AdSense (limited for content) I’ve only made about $14; AdSense won’t payout until you make a minimum of $100, and they changed their rules a few months ago, which wiped out my tiny balance all together. On Stemit.com, in about two months, my account value has already risen to around $4.5.
It works like a social media platform – somewhere between WritersCafe and Facebook in operation. It’s a bit cumbersome in these early beta days. Anyway, you read other blogs, participate in contests, and group activities, which you “upvote” and share you own content for upvotes. The upvotes is how the cryptocurrency payouts are apportioned, so the more active you are, the more people who read and upvote your work, and the more you upvote others’ works, the more your account value will grow.
Let me know if/when you’re on there. I’m MomzillaNC there too.
6 Years Ago
Hey, Clive… did you get around to checking out Steemit,com? In just a couple of months, my account.. read moreHey, Clive… did you get around to checking out Steemit,com? In just a couple of months, my account value is up to $14. That has outpaced my AdSense account that never quite made it to $14 after 4+ years.
If you read my work and comment, I'll return the favor on your work. I'm not adding new friends nor accepting read requests.
I am a classically trained artist and was an award-winning graphic desig.. more..