My Forever Valentine

Something special for Valentine's Day 2015

My Forever Valentine

My forever Valentine

You will always be in my heart

Fidelity and loyalty are my pledge

One heart of love laid bare for you

Reverently made an altar to Love

Endowed with sanctity by your devotion

Veracity writ in your every glance

Enduring loyalty and sustaining love

Reverently offered in your gentle touch

Valentine’s Day and every day

Are ours ever and forevermore

Love plucked down from the stars

Entwining our two hearts in one

Nestling here in our embrace

Testifying God’s great gift to us

In gentle, softly whispered kisses

Nature blessed our noble hearts to

Encircle our souls united across all time

Author's Note

The art in this post are also my original creations.

Reviews

[TL Boehm]

Well, ok, I read this and went "awww" - a sincere, warm "awww" and got a bit wistful...I'm shaking it off because I'm a pragmatic old dog - but for a moment....you got me. Well done and even better that the acrostic flows effortlessly. I really like the graphic too. Bravo.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much. It's my own true love story.

[Alexa Tasch]

aw! This is definitely one of the better valentines day poems I've read!

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[A. H. Pinley]

I like how you laid the piece out. Great use of the words, "MY FOREVER VALENTINE"!

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Mila]

Very sweet, and a great testament to Valentine's Day! Well done! :)

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Jamestown]

Awesome job,thanks for sharing, , b-blessed.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[MsJewel]

A beautiful acrostic, perfect for Valentines Day and your art is just as lovely!

:) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Saddam]

My forever Valentine
You will always be in my heart.

Beautifully express dear which a heart want to. Lovely creation.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Benedict Mdluli]

What???? Oh! Man wish I could be this good Oh! I'm dedicating this one to my own valentine, Thank you very much your works keeps me wondering if I should do more as well or let it slide, but sliding is not an option caz this is inspiration right there. Wonderful poem and creativity.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you so much.

But, do try not to hold yourself in comparison to other poet's voices. Every voice is unique and has something to share. As for improving your own writing, that comes with much reading and lots of practice. Read great literature and authors all the time.

"Writers write always. Great writers read, then write."

[Benedict Mdluli]

Thank you for the motivation & inspiration I love more the part "Writers write always. Great writers read, then write." Thank I'll keep that at heart. &maintain uniqueness.

[MomzillaNC]

Write on… :)

[Benedict Mdluli]

I will always :)

[R Smith]

beautiful tribute to love and Valentine's day Mom, i like the art too, excellent work by you bravo :)

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks, Richard.

[NoelHC]

The acrostic was well done, and the lines flowed. Impressive art work as well.
Well done.

[MomzillaNC]

ty :D