My Forever Valentine

My Forever Valentine

A Poem by MomzillaNC
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Something special for Valentine's Day 2015

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My Forever Valentine


My forever Valentine

You will always be in my heart


Fidelity and loyalty are my pledge

One heart of love laid bare for you

Reverently made an altar to Love

Endowed with sanctity by your devotion

Veracity writ in your every glance

Enduring loyalty and sustaining love

Reverently offered in your gentle touch


Valentine’s Day and every day

Are ours ever and forevermore

Love plucked down from the stars

Entwining our two hearts in one

Nestling here in our embrace

Testifying God’s great gift to us

In gentle, softly whispered kisses

Nature blessed our noble hearts to

Encircle our souls united across all time




© 2021 MomzillaNC


Author's Note

MomzillaNC
The art in this post are also my original creations.

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Well, ok, I read this and went "awww" - a sincere, warm "awww" and got a bit wistful...I'm shaking it off because I'm a pragmatic old dog - but for a moment....you got me. Well done and even better that the acrostic flows effortlessly. I really like the graphic too. Bravo.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much. It's my own true love story.



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I love seeing new, creative poems, and I rarely see acrostics. I think you did a great job weaving romantic, whimsical verses into a creative format of poem. Thanks for sharing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. This is the second acrostic I've composed.
Wow and awww. Gorgeous as the spirit that wrote this affirming true love and fidelity. He should be the proudest...Congrats to both...:)......

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much, Sami.
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

You are welcome...:).......
A beautiful pledge of love.. forever united as one loyal and faithfully to the one forever Valentine..great acrostic poem

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much!
Beautiful. Very romantic.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

ty :)
I have to agree with TL Boehm on this one. You had me for a moment, but I'm too much of a cynic I guess. Still a very good poem. Gotta try my hand at acrostic sometime. Do love the graphic.


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Then, how can you feel cynical towards the sentiments in this poem. I'm a realist. I know most folks.. read more
realmwriter

9 Years Ago

I read it from a past standpoint. But of current life, I do not feel cynical. It's a good poem non t.. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

My own past was very unpleasant as well. I hope people will take away from my writings the assurance.. read more
some fabulously romantic lines. I hope this love will last till the end of time :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. We've been together almost 24 years, married for 23. Every year finds us more in love. I'.. read more
A graceful and beautiful poem. The art is amazing. You are an inspiration Momzi.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

TYVM :)
This is beautiful, sweet, deep, emotional, and simply so romantic.
I love the way you have written it out, its creative, and looks more poetic.
I enjoyed this read, keep writing :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
cimmy wuv xxxooo

9 Years Ago

anytime :)
MomzillaNC, God has given you so, so many talents!! I am 3 yrs older than you and feel like I'm listening to my first Donna Osmond record; singing along learning the words. I have to say: You are amazing! And I thank God i stubbled onto this site and have stayed to read your words and others. This is beautiful!!! You are so blessed. I'm thinking of your voice, your writing and NOW ARTWORK! Well done as always. Thank you so much. Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Confuser

9 Years Ago

The halo was a brilliant idea; I'm hoping a juror; someone else sees it; someone gets curious about .. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks. I think everyone sees it, sort of. That's the point. Ms Lee-Finch is going to be cast in sta.. read more
Confuser

9 Years Ago

Brilliant! Cannot wait. Dale
You did the art too? Those are amazing!! The poem I thought was pretty decent. A lot of flowery language and I'm sure the sentiment is real and honest but I couldn't connect with it. Not entirely sure why.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm sorry you couldn't relate to the poem. I can only say it's my own true love story bet.. read more

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