I Love You…

Something rather experimental for me in style. Composed 21 January 2015 for my husband's birthday (22 Jan).

I love you…

Listen to the quickening of my breath

of the thum-thump, thump-thump beating of my

virtuous and passionately racing heart

ever hastened by the nearness of you

You gathered the pieces of my shattered heart

overlaid the shards upon your own and

united both hearts to beat as one

I Love You…

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh! and i love this poem!! and thank you so much for this perfect expression!:
"of the thum-thump, thump-thump beating of my
virtuous and passionately racing heart"

its what we all want.. its what we all need .. so uplifted by this poetry .. thank you for sharing!! great job says i!!
E.

[MomzillaNC]

Wow. Thank you for such fulsome praise!

[Einstein Noodle]

well deserved .. and i do truly love what you say in it!

[MomzillaNC]

ty :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful, wonderful and gentle words for love. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks so much!

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear poet.

[Robert Trakofler]

okay this is just gulp my heart just popped out of my chest what a lucky man:)

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks! But, I'm the lucky one. All the true joy I've known in my life has been with him.

[Robert Trakofler]

so jealous envious and happy truly in a good way not the normal connotation its a nice thing to hear and see and feel:)

[MomzillaNC]

☺️ 😉

[Jordan]

Loving the candid nature - it matches the statement. I've missed reading your writing, nice one.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Jamestown]

Absolutely fantastic piece of work! Love it! Going to favorites, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much.

[Michel'le]

I really like this
This was beautiful!!

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much. "My Forever Valentine" is another acrostic love poem I wrote for my husband.

[Pryde Foltz]

A beautiful mosaic of love. Wonderful seasonal write, Denise:)

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks, Pryde.

[MsJewel]

A beautifully sweet and romantic acrostic. This form can be a challenge. Often the lines are short and the flow is cut off and choppy, but your words flow as graceful as a dance of love! Stunning poetry my friend.

:) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

Thank so much. Coming from you, that is high praise, indeed.

[hardeep sabharwal]

Nice Valentine's day write, I wish you and your husband a best time,,
I like the structure and the words, good job

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. It does work for Valentine's Day. But, it was actually written for his birthday on Jan 22

[Sami Khalil]

An excellent Valentine's gift to your hubby. Any man will be ecstatic to hear melodious words like this. ...:).....

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. It was actually written for his birthday on Jan 22. But, you're right, it works for Valentine's Day too.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).................