Listen Up!

A secret about us ladies…

Listen up, you too cool dudes!

Pay attention, ya “totally hoopy froods!”

I’ve got a secret I’m a waitin’ to tell…

But, some ladies don’t know… s’I ain’t gon' yell!

You opine and moan… you don’t understand us.

Hang about! There’s no need for such fuss!

The plain truth… I’m tellin’ ya true…

We really don’t understand you!

That’s not the secret I wanna share…

I don’t know… ya might not even care…

Still, here’s why she can’t help you understand her…

It’s silly but true… I think you’ll concur…

Not jokin’ when I say this… seriously, brother!

We ladies really don’t understand each other!

by D. Denise Dianaty

Author's Note

Truth shared just for laughs…

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Great light heartedness in this writing, and in a way quite the arrival really. Trying to let us know that is not so much of a question of gender understanding but more of human beings understanding each other and the moment, only logical I guess when we are told that if us, as males do not understand the female counterpart, amongst each other, the same appears to be.

Oh, boy we are doomed then.

Thankyou

[MomzillaNC]

The research may never lead to full discovery… but, ahhhhh… what delightful experiments! :D

[Malister Mikey]

This was pretty funny to read though I knew the secret all along lol. Good write

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

A fun write that keeps the reader seek more. Excellent...:)........

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..........................

[Parimal Pratyush]

Rap battle kinda feel to the poem. Hehe. Loved it from start to finish.

Thank you.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[hardeep sabharwal]

lolz,, last line was fascinating
I enjoyed it :)

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

Funfilled ride!
Awesome!
The secret is finally out!
I loved it!
:)

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Sunny]

LOL! This is funny. I think I read it to fast, but it seems fun and upbeat. :)

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Chris]

A good conversational tone - to me. A dialogue's delivery carries the meaning. Of course true understanding is in the listening AS you watch the eyes...

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. I just thought it was a funny way to state the truth! :D

[Chris]

It is and it came across well...

[Lyn Anderson]

Cute, and right, and funny.:)

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. IDK why this one came to me! But it really tickled me!

[ImSJ]

Goodness! This does not help at all! Some secrets should remain so. You have confirmed my long held suspicion that there is no hope of averting trouble in paradise.

[MomzillaNC]

LMAO! Truth isn't always enlightening!