Lost In Your Calidity

In answer to the color challenge

Ahhh… love… to rest a kiss…

‘Pon the fullness of your lips…

T’would be my life’s vitality.

Come, my love, with me,

To the florid depths of rapture.

Walk with me in the glow of love,

The blush of life all about us.

Lie with me among the fragrant

Dew-kissed silken petals.

Together, we’ll revel

In the fervency of passion.

Let me be lost in your calidity.

Author's Note

I've answered the color challenge. Can you guess what color?

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Had to look calidity up, a new word for me. Thank you. A warm and intense poem, without mentioning colour at all. A lovely read. Well done.

Chris

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

I love a good romantic poem. this was a great one.

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks. Have you every written a color challenge poem?

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

nope. I didn't know about it./ by the way after reading your poem I wrote one called "Wjen Love Is The Main Feature"

[MomzillaNC]

The color challenge was some time ago. The challenge was to write a poem about color without naming the color.

[The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)]

Well your poem was bright red.

[Briana O'Connor]

Pink or red? Very well done. I adore the way you added a sense of romance and a story line within the description portrayed.

[MomzillaNC]

Not pink. Thank you.

[Lyn Anderson]

My immediate impression was red.

[MomzillaNC]

You're not wrong! Thanks.

[Jordan]

What beauty! Truly a deep-rooted, joyful love.

I guess red, but if not, then pink. Beautiful piece :)

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks! It's not pink. No fluff there…

[John]

I think the colour must be red. This is a passionate variation of that well known poem, Come Live With Me And Be My Love.

[MomzillaNC]

You mean "The Passionate Shepherd to His Love" by Marlowe? Wow! I'm deeply honored by such a comparison! Thank you so much.

And, you're guess of the color is correct.

[Sindu]

Beautiful description for a beautiful colour. I have to enter in the competition or i go mad with lines squiggling in my head :P
Your amazing Momzilla!!

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much.

[MomzillaNC]

It's not precisely a competition. There's not one winner. The group is about challenging each other and ourselves to stretch our poetic sinews; in which sense, we all win.

[Sindu]

I didn't mean to come across as a crazy contender or anything. I meant a challenge not a competetion, my bad. It's nudging ones reserves into unknown to create sometime otherwise may not be such. I get it.. not about winning but win some love..

[MomzillaNC]

I look forward to reading your color…

[Sindu]

aye, aye Momzilla! I'll see what I can do..

[Frieda P]

I already guessed right, I won't give it away....the florid depths of rapture. OH MY...

[MomzillaNC]

Yes, I rather thought that line was hotly inspired. Thanks.

[Frieda P]

Super steamy...you're welcome.