Whisper me a kiss…

"The Kiss" by Klimt

Whisper me a kiss…

Softly… softly brushing my cheek

As an - Oh! - so delicate caress…

A gentle kiss upon my fingertips,

So healing in its tenderness…

Breathing your kiss upon my mouth,

You softly whisper me a kiss…

Oh! Whisper me a kiss…

In your sweet breath is the promise

Wafting me gently to a healing space

This oft tossed ship carried ‘pon your breath

Oh! Let me harbor in your embrace!

Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…

Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space.

Oh! Again… Whisper me a kiss…

In your arms, the promise of forever…

Shining as stars in your ebony eyes

Come my love, tomorrow’s our dawn…

Floating free as the star flies 

Our love, the vessel… you, my tether…

On whispered kisses, together we’ll rise.

Softly… Softly… Whisper me a kiss…

by D. Denise Dianaty

Author's Note

I finished this one, 08/30/2014.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is breathtaking..
"whisper me a kiss" ... so soft, so sweet, so filled with passion without going over that fine line from sensual to erotic....and the painting you chose is the perfect compliment to your gorgeous poem.
Stunning!
:) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you so much. From you, this is high praise indeed.

[prince digbani]

a great poem for the morning...bringing to life the love needed in each day.....love it

[MomzillaNC]

That's an intriguing perspective on this poem that I didn't see. Thank you.

[prince digbani]

your welcomed...i had similar feedback when someone read my poem "MY Angel of my heart"

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i was raised catholic...kiss was pretty much it, except for soem harmless petting...so we made the most of that activity of kissing...and appreciate maybe moreso than most.

this brought me back to my youth, and parking on Briggs street.

[MomzillaNC]

I'm pleased my words spoke to you also. This was my attempt to put into words the way my husband has in his touch, in his kiss.

[Shekinah2015]

Nice! Well written and you used words well! Keep writing.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Master K-tops]

Wow! Really nice words. The poem flows really well and the underlying tenderness spreads throughout the work. Overall, it was an interesting read.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[ron]

I must say...this was a delight to read.
You have captured a kiss and shared it with us all.
Well done dear poet, well done.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. I hoped it would be an adequate expression of one of my husband's most enduring behaviors.

[ron]

He is very blessed that such a poem was written with such love for him.

[Bob B]

I love the imagery and the flow of the poem. The usage of alliteration and consonance with the "s" sound was beautiful.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

Gee! I didn't notice that with the "s" sound.

[Akshay]

The flow is incredible and the font really makes it a joy to read. I can't put a finger on just one line and say that I love it, I like it whole.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much.

[Sami Khalil]

"Come my love, tomorrow’s our dawn…
Floating free as the star flies "

A very nice and softly romantic poem...:)................

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. I was trying to put into words a way my husband has in his touch, the treasured feeling of it.

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).....

[Frieda P]

Gorgeous and elegantly written, a whispered kiss within a sigh, love the notion. Softly speaks volumes....

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you so much.

[Matching Socks]

Agree with Fabian, this has such a beautiful feeling and flow.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much.