Whisper me a kiss…

Whisper me a kiss…

A Poem by MomzillaNC


"The Kiss" by Klimt


Whisper me a kiss…


Softly… softly brushing my cheek

As an - Oh! - so delicate caress…

A gentle kiss upon my fingertips,

So healing in its tenderness…

Breathing your kiss upon my mouth,

You softly whisper me a kiss…


Oh! Whisper me a kiss…


In your sweet breath is the promise

Wafting me gently to a healing space

This oft tossed ship carried ‘pon your breath

Oh! Let me harbor in your embrace!

Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…

Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space.


Oh! Again… Whisper me a kiss…


In your arms, the promise of forever…

Shining as stars in your ebony eyes

Come my love, tomorrow’s our dawn…

Floating free as the star flies 

Our love, the vessel… you, my tether…

On whispered kisses, together we’ll rise.


Softly… Softly… Whisper me a kiss…



by D. Denise Dianaty

© 2015 MomzillaNC


Author's Note

MomzillaNC
I finished this one, 08/30/2014.

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I love romantic poetry and this is breathtaking..
"whisper me a kiss" ... so soft, so sweet, so filled with passion without going over that fine line from sensual to erotic....and the painting you chose is the perfect compliment to your gorgeous poem.
Stunning!
:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. From you, this is high praise indeed.



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Amazing and beautiful poetry.
"Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…
Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space."
Your description allowed the reader to feel the emotion and know the value of the kiss. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry for the kiss.
Coyote



Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Wow so much love and Elegance
as the words flutter across the page so beautiful.



Nicely penned thank you for sharing my friend BRAVO!




Oh! Whisper me a kiss…




In your sweet breath is the promise

Wafting me gently to a healing space

This oft tossed ship carried ‘pon your breath

Oh! Let me harbor in your embrace!

Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…

Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space.




Oh! Again… Whisper me a kiss…




In your arms, the promise of forever…

Shining as stars in your ebony eyes

Come my love, tomorrow’s our dawn…

Floating free as the star flies

Our love, the vessel… you, my tether…

On whispered kisses, together we’ll rise.




Softly… Softly… Whisper me a kiss…




Blessings my Elegant friend. Benita





Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you. This is actually about my husband and a way he has when he kisses me. But, it's become a .. read more
Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

10 Years Ago

you're welcome. :)
Oh I am such a hopeless romantic and your poem makes me sigh and smile from ear to ear… Love it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. It's actually become a companion piece, along with "Shariara's Lament," for my .. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

10 Years Ago

Oh that is cool, will have to check them out as well.
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thanks. Be baldly honest, please. I promise, I can take it.
I love it. It speaks of love in a very dreamy, cloud lifted way. It is being together in all the right ways and being in love for all of eternity. It is as romantic as a piece can be but without all the superfluous mushy stuff. It's like dancing with a kiss between the two of you and letting it draw you nearer still. Absolutely beautiful and lovely.

It inspired almost the juxtaposition, the... well I need say no more. You have spoken on the subject.

Your are quite good.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

realmwriter

10 Years Ago

I too cannot do justice to the way my love has either. I have tried and failed so I have not posted .. read more
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

I look forward to reading it.
realmwriter

10 Years Ago

I look forward to writing it.
A lovely soft piece here..whisper me a kiss..such beautiful poetic words..

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Congratulations on this beautiful winning poem...a most deserving win indeed
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

Thanks so much. I admit, though, I was surprised. Will and Jewel must not have entered… they're am.. read more
  Fran Marie

9 Years Ago

Yes, so many good writers on site...I like Will and Julie romance writes also..
This poem is so real, it hurts... I'm glad SOMEONE is enjoying the blisses of love. Unfortunately, I'm not, but that's another story... ;)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you. My poetry is, for the most part, intensely personal and it cannot but please me that othe.. read more
Unknown

10 Years Ago

With the words you write, I'm sure you give hope to a lot of people! :)
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
This is a masterpiece. So many elements used to spice up this composition. It left me speechless.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm a very lucky woman to have a man in my life who is genuinely that gentle. With this p.. read more
Whisper me a kiss … now that is a refrain. I could just hear old blue eyes crooning away on this one.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you. This was my attempt to pen this way my husband has about his touch and his kisses -- he's.. read more
Pryde Foltz

10 Years Ago

Lucky girl … still looking for a pair of eyes to get lost in.
MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

I never forget just how lucky I am. I've seen the worst and survived it. And he's been my great gift.. read more
I can't think of one critique, from the title to the flow to the content, it is a wonderful, sexy, sensual delight. P.S. the tether is a brilliant line.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
I know this is more a love poem, but you make a simple kiss erotic, hahahaha. It's clever.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

MomzillaNC

10 Years Ago

Thank you. This is actually my attempt to capture this way my husband has, this indescribable gentle.. read more

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