Whisper me a kiss…

"The Kiss" by Klimt

Whisper me a kiss…

Softly… softly brushing my cheek

As an - Oh! - so delicate caress…

A gentle kiss upon my fingertips,

So healing in its tenderness…

Breathing your kiss upon my mouth,

You softly whisper me a kiss…

Oh! Whisper me a kiss…

In your sweet breath is the promise

Wafting me gently to a healing space

This oft tossed ship carried ‘pon your breath

Oh! Let me harbor in your embrace!

Oh love… again… whisper me a kiss…

Set us free to sail ‘cross time and space.

Oh! Again… Whisper me a kiss…

In your arms, the promise of forever…

Shining as stars in your ebony eyes

Come my love, tomorrow’s our dawn…

Floating free as the star flies 

Our love, the vessel… you, my tether…

On whispered kisses, together we’ll rise.

Softly… Softly… Whisper me a kiss…

by D. Denise Dianaty

Author's Note

I finished this one, 08/30/2014.

Reviews

[MsJewel]

I love romantic poetry and this is breathtaking..
"whisper me a kiss" ... so soft, so sweet, so filled with passion without going over that fine line from sensual to erotic....and the painting you chose is the perfect compliment to your gorgeous poem.
Stunning!
:) Julie

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you so much. From you, this is high praise indeed.

[Prince Bonsu]

beautiful piece, i love it.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Chain of Hearts]

You won the 'gentle feelings' contest!? That's awesome! This is such a beautiful and unique piece, no wonder you did! :D

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you very much.

[armin]

Passionate, adorable, beautiful and a sensual piece of poetry. Thank-you.

armin. ...

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[~]

Ahhhh.. I must say a lover of Klimt myself, I can feel the passion reeling inside with that kiss. Loved it!!

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. The drawing at the bottom of the piece is one of my own. But, I just had to include that piece by Klimt. It's often been compare to my husband and myself by friends of mine.

[~]

Oh... beautiful art! I love it!

[MomzillaNC]

ty :)

[willweb]

Now that is what a kiss should be. A poem fashioned after my dreams. Beautiful Momz.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. This is drawn from my own true experience with my husband. A dance may tell a woman if she wants to kiss the man… but the kiss will tell her if she wants to spend forever with him.

[willweb]

You are featuring it and here I am, back again after 8 years. Wow, it definitely proves that poetry can stand the test of time. Once again, beautiful, just as a kiss should be. : )

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks so much. Yeah, I'm featuring my stuff from here as I post it anew on Medium, where I earn a modest return on my $5 a month as a member/partner. I think I average around $25 a month, currently.

[Tate Morgan]

Oh so feminine in this one the feelings the quiet loving touch of it The only thing I would change is the color of the font too light to see easilly

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks so much, Tate. I did worry about the font color and how it would translate on other platforms. Back when I used to do layout like this for a career, I had access to multiple platforms to check such things. I was going for a look of gold -- I'll try something a little darker maybe.

[MomzillaNC]

How about that, Tate? IDK, I don't think I like that.

[MomzillaNC]

Actually, never mind. I don't like that.

[Tate Morgan]

darker i think

[MomzillaNC]

I'm playing with it, trying to get just the right touch of gold to the look. Thanks.

[Tate Morgan]

That's better

[MomzillaNC]

Is it dark enough? I only added 5% more black.

[Tate Morgan]

yes it works

[MomzillaNC]

Thanks. You've been a big help!

[Jamestown]

This is beautiful, I felt the words dancing across the page. Thx for sharing.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[MAC]

a whisper like no other....only lovers can truly share. wonderfully written.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you.

[Beccy]

A kiss such as you describe is the magic that heals all and soothes every care and bother away.

Not everyone is so lucky, but they should be, even if just the once.

Loved this. Beccy.

[MomzillaNC]

Thank you. This is actually a way my husband has when he kisses me sometimes.