I know this is all about vampires and all, but your sentence: "The thirst will always control/Because only blood will/Suffice..." sounds a LOT like revenge. I'm unsure if that was your intention, but those were the kind of images that kept popping up for me. Neat poem, keep it up.
I know this is all about vampires and all, but your sentence: "The thirst will always control/Because only blood will/Suffice..." sounds a LOT like revenge. I'm unsure if that was your intention, but those were the kind of images that kept popping up for me. Neat poem, keep it up.
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I apologize, it's been several years since i have been on here, but I am more than happy to be back. :)
I love all comments, questions, and critiques posted on my writings, and I will try.. more..