amiable tempest

This is a poem that I wrote awhile back, and I have been conflicted about posting it, it runs a little too deep. Though I finally decided why not.

You consume me;

douse me in the feeling of everything.

I forget that

there are fragments of you 

solely reserved for yourself

and that

a piece of you firmly desires suffering.

I continually want to remind you that

you are not criminal for the ways you tried to drown your despair.

I do not want to invade your inner worlds,

I know of the incessant storms

and your ability to get lost there.

Nor do do I want to calm your intensity,

I want to submerge myself in it.

Author's Note

suggestions for a different title?

Reviews

[Quill]

nice poem, a person makes you feel that way, as for a different title, well it seems you like this "storm" so i could recommend "amiable tempest"

[the penumbra]

Thank you very much for the review, I appreciate your feedback. I like the title you suggested to me, I don't know why I never thought of including tempest, it's such a lovely word.