Her golden dusted lips split into a crescent moon grin and the part of me that had once held a now darkened part of her ached with the sting of unrequited love
her laugh sounded of pretty chimes and broken glass, that told less of beauty and more of recent tragedies.
That last stanza has really got me hanging on. So far I've really been enjoying these. I have read a great deal of them so far and I apologize if you don't see me post on all of them. All very beautiful pieces yet few of them just not sure how too respond.. finding to be very thought provoking though. Great stuff
Posted 9 Years Ago
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9 Years Ago
Thank you very much, I deeply appreciate your comments. It just makes me happy knowing that you read.. read moreThank you very much, I deeply appreciate your comments. It just makes me happy knowing that you read them, let alone commented on them!
That last stanza has really got me hanging on. So far I've really been enjoying these. I have read a great deal of them so far and I apologize if you don't see me post on all of them. All very beautiful pieces yet few of them just not sure how too respond.. finding to be very thought provoking though. Great stuff
Posted 9 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
9 Years Ago
Thank you very much, I deeply appreciate your comments. It just makes me happy knowing that you read.. read moreThank you very much, I deeply appreciate your comments. It just makes me happy knowing that you read them, let alone commented on them!
Hello all!
I apologize, it's been several years since i have been on here, but I am more than happy to be back. :)
I love all comments, questions, and critiques posted on my writings, and I will try.. more..