Forever Lost

Shes lost , shes scared, it hurts 
her minds throbbing 

shes confused 

shes lost her mind 

Everything shes worked for shes losing it 

memories come and go like a switch 

she shakes scared for memories to come

her eyes pool with newly fresh tears 

she holds herself 

crying harder than shes ever cried 

Why 

why was she bothered 

why by a night that never returns 

but it does

every year or so to shine 

just like a whole year with cold weather 

Every night is shorter

Every day is longer

She stops and thinks knowing the answer 

she gets ready to end it all knowing she wouldn't bother anyone with trouble 

Shes either forgotten or just a faded memory 

Love the end 
forever gone 

Reviews

[poetical#1]

this is raw emotion good job an great skills

[poetical#1]

that is awesome momo you rock at this poetry thing

[Rukia SnowQueen Kurosak..]

Um thanks rose but you are wrong death is an option for those who have lost the path to faith.thete might anothet chance in love again but it wouldn't be the same especially with all the love and feelings that were shared
You can't have two loves and forget the one who loved you the most.its the samething as fb and rl.its wron having someone in rl and then on fb or anything else.

[Rose]

That's a good poem, it shows how lost she truly is and how she doesn't feel like there is any chance of returning to the world, where she will be able to be among people who care about her. However, death is never an option, even if she feels there is no hope in returning, there will always be that one person, that one speck of life that will give her hope and allow her to return, even though she may not truly want to. Otherwise, good write.

[Rukia SnowQueen Kurosak..]

plz no harsh words