Days and Days

Mondays, Fun-days
Tuesdays, Blues-days

Sad days, Mad days,
I feel really bad-days,

good days, should days
I did what I could-days

never ending Fridays
Can I just ask, “Why?”-days

being late for school days
breaking all the rules-days

Waiting on tomorrow days
the opposite of sorrow-days

Going through all seven days
ending up in heaven-days.

Author's Note

Comments, questions, concerns, thoughts on life?

SideNote: I copyed and pasted this from my tumblr so the fonts messed up.

Reviews

[Alana McGuire]

I like this a lot! I could see it being a spoken word poem. I would love to hear it. :)

[rosemary keogh]

i like this has great humor to it.

[Coffee Vampier]

Soo i really like this!! it is totally creative and fun, nothing like i have ever seen! great work :)

[V]

just a nice piece. so melodious, really flows along while reading. what about turning this into a song? already got a peachy neat tone :) loved reading :)

[Robin]

I like this one , it has a good flow of thoughts and is imaginative .

[Harmonica winds]

Oh I totally love this, This is quite amazing and fun. Very nicely written.

[Miranda Manne]

Quirky! Fun!

I like this poem and the way it felt when I was saying it out loud.