January 29, 2013

Speech is to thought as body is to soul. 
I wish I could stop wasting silence
preparing what to say next. 

When I am a volcano
I’ll sit still until I spill 
and soon again be still.

Reviews

[Relic]

Nice. I read a couple of things of yours and you have a unique style. Nice Job.

[Denham Cole]

There's something 'retro' about this. But something I find great, also. I like it very much.
Well done, Molly.

[zainul]

Nice imagery and idea.
You are very true to say that you can utilize silence for the next content of your speech.
Wonderful work.
Congratulations!!!

[Chaos_Collector]

I think a good name for this poem would be eruption. This poem sure did make me think for a minute. It kind of sucks wanting to say something, but can't. Anywho. An interesting write.

Chaos_Collector