![]() Two Peas in a PodA Poem by Molafvt![]() A hopeful poem about relationship and love![]() You are the heart,
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Such beautiful and strong language to make your point. I like the poem. It was fun to read and the movement was very good. When if we are lucky and find the person who make us complete. No better day in a life. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote Posted 14 Years Ago3 of 3 people found this review constructive. |
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Such beautiful and strong language to make your point. I like the poem. It was fun to read and the movement was very good. When if we are lucky and find the person who make us complete. No better day in a life. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote Posted 14 Years Ago3 of 3 people found this review constructive. |
Liked it very much :)
You've covered the whole spectrum of life and love, painting such beautiful pictures of yin and yang. Alone they are different but equally stunning parts, but when brought together in a unifying bond, they are sublime. That's why 2 peas in a pot remind me of exactly that. In fact, I cannot think of a better comparison so BRAVO! There are so many good lines here, but I absolutely adore:"You and I are love in motion and eternity in the now" - One of a kind sir! Why wait for eternity, when we can have it now and for ever. I also love the line, "WE are Oxygen, you and I, finding stability in our trinity." - such a smart reference to a trinity (H2O = 3 people - hehe) Very nicely done. Posted 14 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
What a nice correlation of "Two peas in a pod." I can truly feel your love here.
Posted 14 Years Ago1 of 1 people found this review constructive. |
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Added on July 13, 2010Last Updated on July 13, 2010
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Molafvt
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