Ladies and Tigers and Flies

55-word story, inspired by The Lady or the Tiger

She gestured to the right, and he nodded.  His breath held in, he walked toward the doors.  Couldn't she be trusted?  He refused to look back in fear.  With a steady hand, he pointed right.

 

The door creaked open as his lover shrieked, her voice penetrating the silent amphitheater.  "I was waving a fly away!"

Reviews

[Jessica L Auster]

I'm enjoying your very short stories. This was had a nice flavor of humor to it, in which I enjoyed.

[Lady Alyria]

It's really hard to do really short stories. That one was funny. Good job. I can't wait to see more of them.

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This was interesting! It could go on if you wanted it to!

[Doug]

That's another funny little piece. This 55 word story idea is interesting. I'll have to give it a shot sometime. It'll be a nice train wreck of fun. :)