Blue ropes

I like to write poems that are kinda lyrics to songs, anyways, I hope you guys like it

Try to keep her out 

and she'll kick the doors wide open

try to keep her now

and she'll find a way somehow

to make it all happen

Dont steal away my shoes

dont steal my dancing blues

Oh Hi there what's your name?

are you sure it hasnt been used before? 

Author's Note

It's still not finished yet, obviously. Waiting for a feedback :) thank you for reading.

Reviews

[lakki]

Not sure if it is sufficient for the better understanding of the use of blue ropes! Looking forward for the finished piece ;)

[RayXor]

a little confusing but i would love to see what it becomes, i am definitely intrigued