Between The Lines

Just an idea I had

What you see
Has gone through so many filters
That by the time it is deemed ready to reach your eyes
It has begun to represent a completely different idea altogether.

Author's Note

I'm hoping that last line is almost impossible to read...otherwise the whole piece is a failure, in my opinion.

Reviews

[Vinyl Affair]

This is not a failure, but a work of art. I'm not sure what to think, what to see or what to feel.. which only makes this so much more intriguing. Well done, you have talent even in short poem's as such. Continue on with your works, they are pleasing to read.

[Muse]

This was different for you...thanks for the random read. xo

[Emily Rae]

such a true message... and creative a way of illustrating the perspective beyond using language

[GreenSkeleton16]

loved it

[Me]

Absolutely brilliant, much enjoyed.

[Arielle Ann]

oh well Its visible..lol! but the lines conveyed a lot..it could mean, a person after many years of filtration becomes distilled enough to become separated of all his components and ultimately turns invisible/different to himself :D