Between The Lines

Just an idea I had

What you see
Has gone through so many filters
That by the time it is deemed ready to reach your eyes
It has begun to represent a completely different idea altogether.

Author's Note

I'm hoping that last line is almost impossible to read...otherwise the whole piece is a failure, in my opinion.

Reviews

[Vinyl Affair]

This is not a failure, but a work of art. I'm not sure what to think, what to see or what to feel.. which only makes this so much more intriguing. Well done, you have talent even in short poem's as such. Continue on with your works, they are pleasing to read.

[LauraraMonique]

This was not a failure at all. It was art and you have talent. Loved reading this piece thank you for sharing it!

Best,

Laurara Monique
( http://lauraramargosian.com/ )

[Moflo]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

A thought provoking piece. Well penned...:)

[Moflo]

Thank you!

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Sunni Davis]

Great piece! It definitely gives me something to ponder.

[Moflo]

Thank you!

[John]

The poem has turned the optician's eye chart into a metaphor for control of what we see. Very clever. Or makes the reader feel he is clever for reading so much into this short piece.

[Bare trees]

Nope, not a failure. Just a good poem sifted of all unimportant words. Great thought.

[William Maisonave]

I love the concept...your work is always creative and fresh so im not suprised. good s**t

[koty bell]

awesome write man :)

[Kaa Na Kalyanasundaram]

very nice to read. with wishes.

[Genevive]

this is artful!!

[DalainaRenee]

Interesting!!