I Wanna Be A Porn Star!

I Wanna Be A Porn Star!

A Poem by Moflo
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Just for fun.

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Tenth grade English teacher,
It took me seven years
But now I understand
Why you did not laugh
When I answered your question:
"What do you wanna be when you grow up?"

© 2011 Moflo


Author's Note

Moflo
Really just a fun piece I wrote last year, its nothing special but hopefully you get a laugh out of it or something. Enjoy.

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Nice work if you can get it. What's interesting here are the first three six syllable lines, very orderly and direct, and then the second three are three distinct meters, where you give us your punch, and the flow offsets perfectly the final question. The title as answer is wonderful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is so funny! I was debating when I saw the title if I wanted to read---- But I'm glad I did!
I can just imagine some kid saying that to a stuck up teacher!! Very, very funny!!


Posted 13 Years Ago


ha. I love this. I can really apprecaite a work that cannot stand without the title. There's something about an involved title that sparks my interest. This is very funny. =)
KH

Posted 13 Years Ago


Quick and hilarious. Really enjoyed the title after I finished reading your poem. Even if its as simple as it sounds, it has that smartness and that touch..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fabulous! haha I love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Well, you're alright Mike but I don't know if I want to see that much of you. hahahaha...you should have chosen male prostitute instead...You could find yourself a sugar mama that way and she could leave you her millions. (laughing hysterically)

Posted 13 Years Ago


Sweet! Teachers hear it all, from the mouths of babes, you know =)

Posted 13 Years Ago


XD very amusing

Posted 13 Years Ago


LOL!!! thats a funny one 100/100

Posted 13 Years Ago


LMAO!!! Great response Mike,,,,hahaha! Thanks for the chuckle:)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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