She Said She Would Never Break Up With Me

She Said She Would Never Break Up With Me

A Poem by PoeticFury
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When we were young I can recall how we use to fight.

I can remember the times where we had rocky nights.

To the times where we use to say that I hate you, but I will never leave you.

Guess you really did believe in that two wrongs indeed does not make a right.

How I use to question why you never use to try and be strong.

Though you would come right back and say that why don't you make love to me, or show me love after a long day since I been gone.

...How long did we argue on that?

That true love would have it's battles.

How you would hit me in the face.

Though you said that you would never break up with me.

I never did hit you back.

How some use to judge us on race.

All cause I was mix, and you were not black.

How you hated my dog.

How I hated your cat.

Though I told you that I would never leave you.

Guess we both were evil in some of our ways.

Trying to figure out a unique plan of attack.

Then things started to get better so I thought, but then I found out that I would spend more money on weed than you.

On the other hand you spent money that went off track.

Not in your head, but on crack...

That made me crack.

Then we both decided to seek help.

Not even the doctor was able to.

He said our case and love hate relationship will never last.

Then we both said I will never leave you, and then we came back with a different least on life.

Didn't we make him feel whack.

Then you told me that you had high blood pressure, and sometime your chest would hurt.

You ask me to stop my habits.

To live a clean life.

I did, but I asked you to do the same.

Though all along like you I felt hurt.

Then those same words like I hate you, or don't need you.

...It turned into us making money the right way. Finding work......

The things we would call each other were playful.

You would call me a loser.

I would tell you take off that mini skirt.

You said that I was a jerk.

I would then say that I am your jerk as I kissed you, and leave no longer on the inside would I go berserk.

I did all those things.

I knew then that we were bound to stay together.

We made a promise to each other that I will never leave your side, or you till the end of forever.

As I felt on top of the world.

I got a call from the doctor saying that you were not breathing.

The thoughts of all I wanted began to leave my head.

How can this happen?

How can the one thing that I love the most be leaving.

When she said that she will never leave.

I went through the process to place you away.

As everyday I would cry on my knees.

Then I could not say how could she?

We been through a lot of things.

Not to mention she kept her promise that she never will break up with me.

I'll see you soon I love you”

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© 2011 PoeticFury


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THIS SEEMS REAL AND CONCRETE AND YOU LAY IT OUT FOR THE READER AND THE STORY UNFOLDS FOR WHAT IS WORTH...AS LEAST THIS ONE HAS UPS AND DOWN...YET IN THE END THINGS WORKOUT AND BOTH OF YOU ARE STILL TOGETHER...EVERYTHING ELSE IMMATERIAL...TRIAL AND ERROR...

Posted 11 Years Ago



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