Take My Hand.. You Ready? Let's Jump

Let's do this......

Please wipe those tears.

I just wonder what is left.

There is no one to trust.

No one wants to help.

Except for me.

I done all I can do.

You done all you can for me.

You told me I would always be here for you.

Let's burn down all our pain.

Set fire to those who were in our hearts and watch them burn in that flame.

Let's patch up our scars and make room for the new.

Take my hand and let's walk to that ledge.

Grip my hand tight.

Take a look around.

Know that I always loved you.

It's a long jump off of this edge.

At least they won't have to look to find us when it is all set and done.

This is more simple than playing rushing roulette with a gun.

You not ready yet?

Thinking about old times huh?

I have to admit they were never really that fun.

Though what was the point of being there?

All they did was judge us.....

Made fun of us, and then stare.

Talk about the way we talk.

The way we act...

The clothes we wear.

I never got it.....

Now you ready to do it?

Are you sure?

Cause once we hit the bottom down there only you and I know what we are going to land on.

There is no way to stop it.

I will take that smile as a yes.

At least where we are going we don't have to worry about others talking about us cause they have more.

Yet try and hurt us cause we have less.

You don't want to cross your heart?

Do you want to count to three?

Do you just want to take the dive?

Ok jump.....

As we take our last dive and leave this world behind.

We are jumping into the pit of love, and if we manage to survive at the bottom.

I will tell all my fellow writers that we are alive not dead.

There is no blood on the ground no one else is down here.

It is so peaceful.

This image is something that I would love to repeat.

I should have done this a long time ago.

I should have listen to what my inner soul said.

Are you ok?

Are you hurt?

No you are not.

Even though you have a rip in your skirt, but this place will do us just fine it beats the planet earth.

Let's start our new life right here and now.

What will it take for us to make it?

Well we will have to show each other how.

Tell your friends as I have already told mine.

Write a letter let in float in that ocean down stream, and hope it reaches them in time.

Slit not your wrist, but this life, and say this is the pain you cause me, but now I am fine.

I will send any kind of sign.

You all will love it down here.

It's like a writers paradise.

No one is here, but us at the moment.

It's like we always envisioned a writers world to come to reality our design.

Wait....

What did you say?

You are right I almost forgot.

To our enemies every boy and girl woman or man that caused us to be here in the first place.

Thank you, but if you come here the life as you think you know it will be erased.

Poets you will never understand.

So stay on your own throne.

Leave us here on our own.

I am glad you hurt me.

Cause now you are gone.

If anyone comes down here don't be afraid to jump down here.

We will be waiting, so know that you are not alone.

Therefore don't think you are going to die.

We need you....

I need you.

You may not think you are important, but I know you are.

Special, kind, nice.

I think I see you now.

See told you that is was kind of high.

Know that you are not alone someone is always by your side.

You make me....

Hope one makes you cause no one is perfect we all make mistakes, but down here this is our world.

You know who else loves you and need you.

My love.....

She do...

You see she said it, and so do I.............

Author's Note

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[Glen Yumang Manese]

I liked the theme...the subconscious mind speaking to you and the way the whole event unravels on the page... the voice is constantly reminding you in the plot lines... I would look through and edit this a bit with the line break-up and correct word usage... I can do a quick take at it:

Let's do this...
Please wipe those tears.
I just wonder what is left.
There is no one to trust.
No one wants to help except for me.
I done all I can do.
You done all you can for me.
You told me I would always be here for you.

Let's burn down all our pain.
Set fire to those who were in our hearts .
Watch them burn in that flame.
Let's patch up our scars and make room for the new.
Take my hand and let's walk to that ledge.
Grip my hand tight.
Take a look around.
Know that I always loved you.
It's a long jump off of this edge.

At least they won't have to look to find us.
When it is all set and done.
This is more simple than playing Russian roulette with a gun.
You not ready yet?
Thinking is about old times, huh?
I have to admit they were never really that fun.
However, what was the point of being there?
All they did was judge us...
Made fun of us, and then stare.
Talk about the way we talk.
The way we act...
The clothes we wear.

I never got it...
Now you ready to do it.
Are you sure?
Cause once we hit the bottom down there.
Only you and I know what we are going to land.
There is no way to stop it.
I will take that smile as a yes.
At least where we are going we don't have to worry.
About others talking about us cause they have more.
Yet try and hurt us cause we have less.
You don't want to cross your heart.
Do you want to count to three?
Do you just want to take the dive?
Ok jump...
As we take our last, dive and leave this world behind.

We are jumping into the pit of love.
If we manage, survive at the bottom.
I will tell all my fellow writers that we are alive not dead.
There is no blood on the ground no one else is down here.
It is so peaceful.
This image is something that I would love to repeat.
I should have done this a long time ago.
I should have listened to what my inner soul said.
Are you ok?
Are you hurt?
No, you are not.
You have a rip in your skirt.
This place will do us just fine it beats the planet earth.
Let's start our new life right here and now.
What will it take us to make it?
Well we will have to show each other how.

Tell your friends as I have already told mine.
Write a letter let in float in that ocean downstream.
Hope it reaches them in time.
Slit not your wrist, but this life.
Say a pain you cause me.
Now I am fine.
I will send any kind of sign.
You all will love it down here.
It's like a writers paradise.
No one is here, but us at the moment.
It's like we always envisioned.
A writer’s world comes to reality our design.
Wait....
What did you say?
You are right I almost forgot.
To our enemies:
Every boy and girl, woman or man caused us to be here.
Thank you.
If you come here, the life as you think you know it is erase.
Poets you will never understand.
So stay on your own throne.
Leave us here on our own.
I am glad you hurt me.
Cause now you are gone.
Anyone wants to come down here.
Don't be afraid to jump down here.
We will be waiting, so know that you are not alone.
Therefore, don't think you are going to die.

We need you....
I need you.
You may not think you are important.
I know you are special, kind, nice.
I think I see you now.
See, told you it was somewhat high.
Know that you are not alone someone is always by your side.
You make me....
Hope one makes you cause no one is perfect.
We all make mistakes, but down here, this is our world.

You know who else loves you and need you.
My love...
She do...
You see she said it, and so do I...

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