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What If Everyone Cared

What If Everyone Cared

A Poem by PoeticFury
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only if...

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What if someone was to fall. Emotionally and physically being down on their luck.

Imagine of someone picked them up and had them saved from the bullets that came to them.

Instead of being hit and killed for some random reason think of how it would have been if they were able to still be alive and can say that they havre ducked.

What if instead of it I shall say a humans eyes glared and instead cared. They could have the same and protect their childs dream and the pain they had to bare.

If in a split second love could have showed instead of being hungry for gold and shine. How about protecting the homeless from the cold.

To understand what a person goes through, but wait.... that makes me think I'm all high and mighty you think s**t can't happen to you?

You are going to say I got mine you know what I mean, but what about saving that child from all of his or her screams?

If to teach them on what things meant. Not just to care about people, but self to not talk on the phone to lesson your attention, but to increase your chances of an accident.

Its not a trick question just a hint, to instead stop the war screw the fancy car. To know who not I, but they are.

To have violence and self defense to become intimate. If we all cared would 9/11 still actually happened.

If we got on the same page would all this corruption still be attacking.

To me its a dream but mentally I often pray everytime I pick up a pen I hope this will happen someday.

People will be people.

Movies will be entertaining not just another sequeal.

Boys will be boys; the way they should be.

GIrls will be girls and wait for the right time one who does not give up the p****

Hi would not result in a gun shot BAM another dies.

What about clean water a right using commonsense daughter a mother there for the farther. A farther there for the mother. That is called loving each other.

....Damn that is serious.

The lives we live they say we picked it, or can I say on the contray with brainwashed people you become addicted. Like the ink on my page, but look between the lines and decrypt it.

My angels our time has and will come the ones in the past shall be left behind choose to live and stare down the barrel of life in that black hole gun.

While girls are focus on beauyt instead of a community and guys judge and assuming. Does that sound confusing. Hell if everyone cared think of all we will be using.

Its not that hard we just have to make it happen one day. We have to succeed as one we believe one caring about one is not enough. Imagine how it would be if we cared about each other the way we care about self.

"Poetry In Motion"

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© 2011 PoeticFury


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Instead of being hit and killed for some random reason think of how it would have been if they were able to still be alive and can say that they havre ducked.
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Instead of being hit and killed for some random reason think of how it would have been if they were able to still be alive and can say that they have ducked.

OUT WITH THE EDITING...THIS JUST GETS DOWN TO IT IN THE LINES AND YOU BRING UP MAN VIEW POINT THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE READING OF THIS VERSE...YOU SUM THIS UP IN THE LAST LINES:

Its not that hard we just have to make it happen one day. We have to succeed as one we believe one caring about one is not enough. Imagine how it would be if we cared about each other the way we care about self.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Instead of being hit and killed for some random reason think of how it would have been if they were able to still be alive and can say that they havre ducked.
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Instead of being hit and killed for some random reason think of how it would have been if they were able to still be alive and can say that they have ducked.

OUT WITH THE EDITING...THIS JUST GETS DOWN TO IT IN THE LINES AND YOU BRING UP MAN VIEW POINT THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE READING OF THIS VERSE...YOU SUM THIS UP IN THE LAST LINES:

Its not that hard we just have to make it happen one day. We have to succeed as one we believe one caring about one is not enough. Imagine how it would be if we cared about each other the way we care about self.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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