He/She Said I Love You Part 1

He/She Said I Love You Part 1

A Poem by PoeticFury
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This is part one to what I posted yesterday which was two. Hope you all like it

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It takes a heart...

That has been beaten.

The will of someone that has been constantly mistreated or for that matter who has been hurting others doing the mistreating.

To want to take a shot at what some say is a permanent fixture in the life of ones soul.

Which comes in so many forms.

Pure......

Warm.....

Caring...

Cold.....

Some give up on it, but to me it never gets old.cause with times it comes with truth the future no one has knowledge of what it holds.

It makes you do so many things.

Say so many things.

Sometime you wonder if you are really you.

As a result you have a mind, but the body and mouth has it's own controls.

It comes it goes, but pain is temporary so please take a chance to love don't sell out, or go bankrupt with emotion, with it you foreclose.

Think of it as open house you need the right buyer even though this has no price, but if you want the perfect buyer; you have to kill and get rid of all the mouse.

It will never come easy, but believe me it will.

It will drive you.

Maybe divide you.

As said earlier it is a powerful emotion, but just don't let is kill.

So as I leave you with this poem, or maybe I should call it a letter. By the time I finish this I hope that one day you will feel better.

I know its hard, but nothing was build in a day.

She loves me.

She loves me not.

He loves me.

He loves me not.

.....Please take my pain away.

I just want to know what they would say.


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© 2011 PoeticFury


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seems like a vindication of a letter here...as on reads down the lines of this one...I did notice a place needing concern:

Think of it as open house you need the right buyer even though this has no price, but if you want the perfect buyer; you have to kill and get rid of all the mouse.
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Think of it as open house you need the right buyer even though this has no price, but if you want the perfect buyer; you have to kill and get rid of all the mice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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seems like a vindication of a letter here...as on reads down the lines of this one...I did notice a place needing concern:

Think of it as open house you need the right buyer even though this has no price, but if you want the perfect buyer; you have to kill and get rid of all the mouse.
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Think of it as open house you need the right buyer even though this has no price, but if you want the perfect buyer; you have to kill and get rid of all the mice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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