Till The Last Rose Dies (11 Mistakes)

Till The Last Rose Dies (11 Mistakes)

A Poem by PoeticFury
"

roses mean so much to me

"
Dear you......

I know it has been a while since we talked the day when things got confusing between us in the end we decided to take that different path in the ways we would walk.

Although you believe in second chances.

I agree we all deserve one.

That is the first thing you told me before I ever told you.

I never knew how you were able to tell.

Anyway I am going to leave theseroseson your doorstep.

Even though yes we both did wrong.

Just give me one second and then if you never want to talk again you can change my name from lover to gone.

I got a dozen for every mistake that you and I both may have made.

The first rose is for the time that I may have neglected you and made you feel played.

The second is for when I question our trust for each other and at different times we told each other that we went inside the others stuff. Sorry for the raid.

The third is for taking the time to listen to your friends instead of coming to you instead of going off something I heard.

The forth is for when my friend came in town, and when we went out I made you feel like a back wheel. Some call it third.

The fifth is because I missed that special day when you said I love you, but at the time I had something different to say.

The sixth is for the time is when you said if something ever goes wrong. No matter how bad it is get me roses the door is always open and let's talk it out.

"Sorry that you lost your temper"

Even though I did too. Guess none of us remained calm.

The seventh is for the tears I may have made you cry.

The eight is for missing our second date.

The ninth is for all the things that I really mean, but you called them lies.

The tenth is for not returning calls even though sometime we both did that.

The eleventh rose is for saying that there are so many things I have done to make myself look good, yet there were so many things to do.

I guess by now you realize there are 11 mistake roses and one fake one. All the others one yes they may for the moment be alive.

On the other hand if you subtract the sixth rose from the eleventh you will get the fifth I am sorry that I did not say it then, but I will say it now and mean it will all my heart.

I will love you forever and that is something that is true I don't have to be wise. These feelings will forever sit here in reality and in my dream.

Till The Last Rose Dies

© 2011 PoeticFury


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PoeticFury
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